very nice work!
For those clamouring on about "more layers" and "shading more", what is wrong with this style of over accentuation????
At some point everyone must decide between their style preference and 'artistic' approach versus what can look great on the table top.
Personally I really like this style of painting. I don't believe everyone must attain a certain 'look' in their paint schemes, and some people, despite trying to be encouraging and helpful, occasionally miss that point.
That said, everyone is entitled to their opinion.
Rant over. Have a nice day and keep on painting!