Hateful Darkblack Posted May 15, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 Okay, I just looked through a lot of the new pages. Great job, everyone! Hoffman: Needs a graphic, Strategies and Schemes, Leading a Crew, and Playing Against Master. For some reason there was Pandora content in here. I assume this was a C&P error, so I deleted it. Brewmaster: Could use more information about Leading a Crew, Strategies and Schemes, Building a Crew, and Playing Against Master. Wong: Needs a little more Overview of how to use him. Could use more information about Tactics and Tips, Leading a Crew, Strategies and Schemes, Building a Crew, and Playing Against Master. Mah Tucket: Needs a graphic. Also needs more information about Leading a Crew, Strategies and Schemes, Building a Crew, and Playing Against Master. Lucius: Content looks really nice. Personal Retinue should link to the other models. The Upgrades section should include more tactical advice. Right now, it summarizes the abilities, but it would be good to include some suggestions about when and how to use them. McCabe: Looks really nice. It would be good to include links to specific models that work especially well with him. Colette: Looks amazing. Still needs Crew information, and Playing Against Master information. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hateful Darkblack Posted May 15, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 I agree with this, however many of the already "complete" pages italicized abilities/actions instead. Should we eventually correct this, or roll with what is already in place? When you get a chance, correct it. It's not as high priority as getting coverage for all the masters or even other models, though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malal Posted May 15, 2014 Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 What do we do if we want to flesh out a page that's already been started but we disagree with basic premise that are already written? I wouldn't want to step on someone's toes and edit out large chunks but at the same time, if I disagree with what's down, I can't add without taking away first? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grandpapanurgl Posted May 15, 2014 Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 finished up Nicodem and did Mortimer as well. anyone that wants to go correct my grammar feel free tho Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hateful Darkblack Posted May 15, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 What do we do if we want to flesh out a page that's already been started but we disagree with basic premise that are already written? I wouldn't want to step on someone's toes and edit out large chunks but at the same time, if I disagree with what's down, I can't add without taking away first? Please do flesh out the page. Try to make it a better article. If there's stuff you disagree with because you have a different playing style, don't just delete stuff you disagree with. Add additional suggestions. (For example: "Some players use this upgrade to increase melee effectiveness. Others find it's too expensive. Your mileage may vary.") The goal here is to make a set of articles that will be useful for a wide variety of Malifaux players. It's not the right place to hash out an opinionated dispute. Don't start edit wars, or mass delete stuff that you disagree with. PM me with specifics if you want more help with this. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hateful Darkblack Posted May 15, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 finished up Nicodem and did Mortimer as well. anyone that wants to go correct my grammar feel free tho This looks nice. I like how you included suggestions for principles to be thinking about when playing him. One thing you could flesh out, though, is the Crew section. What are good models to choose? (I know a lot of people suggest Nicodem + Toshiro/Punk Zombies, for instance). Nicodem has a lot of Crew to pick, which are the winners. Links to other model pages will help here too. What Totem should they choose, or how should a Nicodem player decide between Vulture and Grave Spirit? What models do you summon when you're new and don't know what to summon? Also, it would be good to talk about Starting a Crew. What's in the initial box, and what should they add after? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PraetorDragoon Posted May 15, 2014 Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 Also, it would be good to talk about Starting a Crew. What's in the initial box, and what should they add after? Good idea to add. Will add that and call Kirai finished. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grandpapanurgl Posted May 15, 2014 Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 i will go back and add those for sure then Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PraetorDragoon Posted May 15, 2014 Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 Well, if somebody can proofread my article, I think I call it done. Maybe there could be some finishing touches, but at least the bones of it are done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nogoatsnoglory Posted May 15, 2014 Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 I can take a look through it here in a second Prae. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PraetorDragoon Posted May 15, 2014 Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 I can take a look through it here in a second Prae. Okay, thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nogoatsnoglory Posted May 15, 2014 Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 Another style question. If we are bolding skills/abilities/etc., should Conditions be italicized then? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PraetorDragoon Posted May 15, 2014 Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 Another style question. If we are bolding skills/abilities/etc., should Conditions be italicized then? I bolded conditions, italicized triggers, and bolded abilities/actions. Don't know if this is the good course of action, but made sense to me. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nogoatsnoglory Posted May 15, 2014 Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 Kirai should be done now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EntrepeNinja Posted May 15, 2014 Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 I wrote a novel! Hoffman done. ENinja 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rgarbonzo Posted May 15, 2014 Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 All Wave 1 Gremlins are done with the exception of the Voodoo Doll. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
necroon Posted May 15, 2014 Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 Necroon, thanks for picking up Neveborn minions. That will be great! My pleasure, good sir. I'll sign up for some more if I feel like I crank these out fast enough. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vaiuri Posted May 15, 2014 Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 Being new to Malifaux I don't think I can be much use - consider me another bod for feedback and proofreading if you can make use of me? Could you use a painting guide on the wiki? I can write tons about that! :-D 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hateful Darkblack Posted May 15, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 Being new to Malifaux I don't think I can be much use - consider me another bod for feedback and proofreading if you can make use of me? Could you use a painting guide on the wiki? I can write tons about that! :-D Vaiuri, thanks for jumping in! I don't know if we want a painting guide on the Wiki. Right now it's mostly a tactica wiki. Do you have one up somewhere already? Please do take up feedback and proofreading. Pick a Master that's done, and do some feedback and proofreading! That will definitely help. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vaiuri Posted May 15, 2014 Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 I don't have anything online, just plenty of real world experience :-) Happy to help however I can, I'll start by reading through the Guild since thats what I'm most familiar with. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Shine Posted May 15, 2014 Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 Just thought I'd share the May PMF statistics with everyone Quite the spike in the past day! As for a painting tacticas, that might be a good idea for expanding into later, but I feel its a bit off point when we still have models without pages still. Also updated the Style Guide http://pullmyfinger.wikispaces.com/Wiki+Style+Guide which should be a good reference article for editors. I'll add more to it as questions come up/are resolved Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rgarbonzo Posted May 15, 2014 Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 Added Bayou Bushwackers, Rooster Riders Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hateful Darkblack Posted May 15, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 Added Bayou Bushwackers, Rooster Riders You rule. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rgarbonzo Posted May 15, 2014 Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 I'll get the Sow and Lightning Bugs up later tonite, hafta make dinner for the kids. Like that is important Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Shine Posted May 15, 2014 Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 Rgar: Lord of the Swamp 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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