edonil Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 Foe! Haven't seen you on in the morning in a while. How's it going? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FoeRender Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 good , got up early today , putting some paint on papa loco . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LonelyPath Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 Hey Foe! ~As I speak my greeting Foe gets set upon and Gothed up by Showgirls~ I think they're a little over excited today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheOneWhoFell Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 hmmm a name..? I'm really bad at names... what about something like... Lilliana...? All I know is that it should have multiple syllables (3-4 to offset Fel) and end in a vowel... aesthetic reasons... *shrugs* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FoeRender Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 # fends off show girls with a bo staff # Back wenches from hell ! oh snap #points the the back wall # its Colette ! # dives out side window onto a waiting hunter # Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 Lilliana works well. Now the next challenge to tackle is writing Soli so that she appears feminine... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LonelyPath Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 (edited) ~The Gothic Showgirls rush off and Goth up Colette who giggles with glee as she gets to join in the fun. Hiding in a cupboard peeking round the door is Cassandra who just buries her head in there hands with dismay at her boss's enjoyment of all the nonsense.~ Edited October 7, 2011 by LonelyPath Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 Yeah, that would be Cassie...and Colette for that matter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheOneWhoFell Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 hmmm... Soli strikes me as the kind of Lady who would go home after a really crappy day, draw a super hot bath, and soak until the water was cold... She'd drink Mead and light candles... And when she was done, she'd put on some super comfortable clothes, brush her hair out, and read a book... And then Jensen would show up with Beer and chips, and she'd want to watch the instant replays of the day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Absolution Black Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 Speaking of writing, i had a go at writing an ABsolution Black prequel, but i must have been in a weird mood because it was soooo dark.....didn't like it so scrapped it all.....too dark, even for Malifaux.. Its hard to get motivated at the moment lol *yawns* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LonelyPath Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 (edited) To dark? You can never get to dark! ~Cassandra sneaks out of the thread before she's noticed and gothed up as well~ Edited October 7, 2011 by LonelyPath Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 ...either I'm a better writer than I thought, or you've got an astounding ability to fill in details, Fell...because that's the idea I was aiming for with Soli... not so much Jensen, but eh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheOneWhoFell Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 What Path said After Reading the bit about how Hamelin got Plagued... *shivers* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Absolution Black Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 To dark? You can never get to dark! Maybe, but it wasn't how i wanted his backstory to really be like, so as i wasn't happy i just hit delete...probably should have saved it just in case! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 Speaking of writing, i had a go at writing an ABsolution Black prequel, but i must have been in a weird mood because it was soooo dark.....didn't like it so scrapped it all.....too dark, even for Malifaux.. Its hard to get motivated at the moment lol *yawns* That's an impressive amount of dark... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 What Path said After Reading the bit about how Hamelin got Plagued... *shivers* Yeah...that was messed up. Not the worst I've ever read (that'd be Fulgrim...holy fething hell) but definitely messed up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Absolution Black Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 That's an impressive amount of dark... Oh yeah...reading it back made me feel ....ick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 Oh yeah...reading it back made me feel ....ick. What are you aiming for with it, anyway? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheOneWhoFell Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 ...either I'm a better writer than I thought, or you've got an astounding ability to fill in details, Fell...because that's the idea I was aiming for with Soli... not so much Jensen, but eh. ummm.... I cheated.... my BA is in English... my concentration was in Creative writing... but I learned that I LOVE to edit... I'm a details nazi... If the details aren't important, I want you to scrap them (and will tell you so). My mind tends to fill in the blanks.... From the way you described Soli, how she is graceful and powerful, I could tell you wanted her to be feminine without being soft.... *shrugs* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheOneWhoFell Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 wow Abs... That's dark... 0_0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LonelyPath Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 Yeah, shame you deleted it AB, I'd have saved it and then later come back to see what could be done with it. Fell, very true with that Hamelin piece, that was very dark indeed, though if you go out and read some of the things Richard Layman wrote before he died... that man was sick I tell you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 That's some impressive cheating, Fell, lol. Right now I've only got a paragraph written up for the next scene, but would you mind looking over it? See if it gives you the same feel, I mean. I can PM it to you. Maybe that'll get the muse out of her post-work stupor... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheOneWhoFell Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 of course, send it over Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Absolution Black Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 What are you aiming for with it, anyway? It was a piece to sort of explain his background...partly his childhood (which contained the icky part) and his training as an assassin, trying to convey how he became as he is now..his rage, his confidence but also his weaknesses.... I just wasn't happy...luckily i'd only written about three paragraphs or so... wow Abs... That's dark... 0_0 Yup....i shocked even myself!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LonelyPath Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 ~Notices some of the gothic showgirls eying Fell and then looking through a collection of gothic lolita outfits~ Well, I've given up discouraging them, Fell, be merciful if they get over eager ~Gets up and walks toward the exit with most of the Gothic Showgirls in tow~ Right, off to paint some models now, see you all later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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