And keep in mind that Wyrd minis are tougher to paint than the GW ones; they don't have all those easy-to-use high lines.
Anyhow, the critique. Good early effort. I like that you matched your sorrows with their crew, and I like the effect you tried for with Pandora. As the above poster, I haven't yet gotten the courage to start messing up light sourcing, and think its a great effect when properly applied. Keep practicing!
After thinning your paints down, the next thing to learn to use is washes. You can go from decent to freakin' nice in about 10 minutes with a well applied wash. The line from GW is a solid, easy to use, versatile set (get a set going, Wyrd, so we can give you our money for paints, too!).
As I said man, great early effort. You have a fully painted crew (which not everyone does)!