if you want some positive criticism from an old LARPie:
Boots will need a Vamp up... Leady J has them Overknee with Padded Protectors... shouldn't be hard to enhance them.
Sword would nead a scabbard and a strap for carrying... not sure about the corset, it looks the part but looking at the miniature i would think about going underbust with some sort of top beneath....
so but overall: i like it!