edonil Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 That show was pretty entertaining, although quite short lived here in the states. Was shocked to find out that it managed multiple seasons, it got axed here after only a few episodes! So, finally heard back from the friend who I did the editing for, she wasn't offended by the critique after all! lol. Which is good, because I was really concerned about that... >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mako Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 Except imagine the detective from that show without the moral stiffness the piemaker provides to keep him in check... ---------- Post added at 07:41 AM ---------- Previous post was at 07:40 AM ---------- That's good, being able to take criticism is one of the most important and hardest bits I reckon! Yeah, two full seasons. Hit and miss show to show but overall a good laugh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 Heh, here's another concept that would make for a great Invested, I think... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Shine Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 Freelance Death Marshall sounds kind of like The Witcher Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 Never played that game, honestly. And more thinking a Necromancer with Death Marshal training, honestly... ---------- Post added at 01:51 AM ---------- Previous post was at 01:48 AM ---------- >.< And the big problem I mentioned in my critique still is there...well, can't expect someone's writing style to change overnight I guess. Just...why the super long sentences? Makes my head hurt, lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Shine Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 AH, the reverse Death Marshall! I like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 Yeah. Can't expect them all to stay sane and on the Guild's side... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Monkey Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 I think I saw that show once or twice... Frightners is a Peter Jackson movie about a psychic who swindles people with his ghost friends and ends up using them to solve a crime.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 Huh. Interesting concept that one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mako Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 Heh, sounds like a really bizarre movie! Long sentences? Eep. Those giant many line things that go on and chain together with commas, or just a massive stream of words with no pauses in it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 Here's an example: There was one I recognized, Sergeant Barthem, the dusky colors of the Athenus One-Eleven regiment accentuating the bruised cut from lip to cheek, his dark eyes looking behind me at the doors briefly before regaining focus. That could definitely be two or three sentences... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mako Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 Ah I see, yeah. Definitely reads nicer with a split or two in it. Still, if you keep advising she'll learn. Hopefully... Well, I've done one arm, so it's bedtime otherwise I'll be in no state to sculpt tomorrow! Later all! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Monkey Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 Night Mako..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 G'night, Mako. So, Monkey, going to go with Mako's character idea, or just the Graverobber bit? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Monkey Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 His idea has merit..... will probably lean that way and then see that the cards say Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 Fair enough. Hopefully we haven't burned out our ideas before we get the rules, lol! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Monkey Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 I dont know, this crew here always seems to be full of ideas.... *grin* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 Heh, very true. Probably why we keep coming back, the muses feed off each other. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Monkey Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 Troublemakers that they are.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 Amen to that. Hey, when's Iron Painter '13, because I'm curious? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Monkey Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 Was about March last year, not sure what is going to happen this year, going to join up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 (edited) Heh, maybe. I'll see about improving the quality of my bases long before I try something like that! But it might be fun to see how long I last... although, I'd put my money down on not long, lol. Edited January 11, 2013 by edonil Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Monkey Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 It is ..... an experience *grin* Do have to admit it was nice to paint something random every round.... but it is hard work. Having access to a decent supply of models would help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 How long are the rounds again? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Monkey Posted January 11, 2013 Report Share Posted January 11, 2013 Two weeks to create and paint, then a week or two off while judging gets done.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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