Webmonkey Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 Edonil's been nice enough to critique my writing. Mostly been minor spelling and grammar errors so far. So at least I'm not feeling too self concious about it. (though,.. he could be just being nice and not wanting to tell me that I suck *laughs*) ---------- Post added at 06:44 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:41 PM ---------- Hmm, I've still not read the first bit. That's a bit poor of me! I'll be catching up on that this weekend methinks, once I help Shine move house... get wrangled into helping move because you own a truck? seems to be how it happens to me anyways,.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mako Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 Edonil's been nice enough to critique my writing. Mostly been minor spelling and grammar errors so far. So at least I'm not feeling too self concious about it. (though,.. he could be just being nice and not wanting to tell me that I suck *laughs*) ---------- Post added at 06:44 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:41 PM ---------- get wrangled into helping move because you own a truck? seems to be how it happens to me anyways,.. Yeah, I was meaning to have a peek myself, see if I could offer praise/suggestions. Just been a bit of a rubbish week. I've ended up helping him move and I don't even have a car! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Webmonkey Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 Necchyevo, tovarisch. Shto dyelayesh? Karasho, spasiba. Ah o Vas? (sorry,.. almost missed that you replied *grin*) ---------- Post added at 07:05 PM ---------- Previous post was at 07:01 PM ---------- And i'm sure that my transliteration into english characters needs some work. i just try to spell it out like it sounds and hope that you can get the basics of what I'm trying to say. ---------- Post added at 07:14 PM ---------- Previous post was at 07:05 PM ---------- Well,.. my story has gotten 78 views so far (minus about 5 of them for myself going back into the thread) But still, that isn't bad. Unless Edonil's been in there the other 70 something times,.. I guess I've at least got few different people looking at it. The only question is,.. are they just not commenting at all? Or is it because they have nothing nice to say? Hrmm, probably just my paranoia kicking in,.. (paranoid??? I'm not paranoid,... *starts checking shirt buttons for hidden microphones,..*) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evilbleachman Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 People lurk on the web. Not everybody will post. :0 Especially if you web around in their corners. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Webmonkey Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 True,.. and i do tend to leave webs everywhere i go,.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evilbleachman Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 Just make sure to use a tissue. D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mako Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 Yeah, the majority of people will read and then not post, because they don't want to bother or they don't feel anything they have to say would be useful. I find it really hard to leave comments on other people's writing, I have to make a huge effort to do it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Webmonkey Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 I suppose that's fair enough. I don't leave messages either though. But then, who am I to say anything about someone else's work when I can barely do my own stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mako Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 Ah, but you don't need to be an old master to say what you liked and disliked about a painting in a gallery. That's the theory, anyway. It takes some practice to get comfortable with it I think! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 Yeah, the writing room is usually pretty shy about commentary. And trust me, if I thought it was bad, you'd be hearing a lot more advice and different kind! And yeah, Adamantium Black is really dark...makes Boltgun Metal look positively shiny. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mako Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 Heh. time to break out the 5 million candlepower daylight plasma beam? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 Pretty much. Although I think I'll avoid it myself, I've managed to get myself burned three times tonight... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mako Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 Thoom? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 ...Thoom? O.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mako Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 No Sergeant Schlock plasma cannon then? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 hm. Gold filigree on the cloak for some freehand? ---------- Post added at 11:20 PM ---------- Previous post was at 11:19 PM ---------- No Sergeant Schlock plasma cannon then? Oh! You were missing the 'Ominous Humm' first! lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mako Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 Very true! I must have had the newer model, without the noise. How careless. It's just not a good weapon without that! I think gold filigree sounds like a plan. NMM, or metallic? lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 Metallic. I'm not messing with NMM. And it's never a good enough weapon that way! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mako Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 I do enjoy schlock, between him and elf its got deranged, dangerous, and cutesy. lol Phew, nearly done the webbing. Photos then, I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 And Petey! Can't forget Petey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mako Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 True, a psychotic koala with delusions of godhood is a fairly epic character! Ugh, getting the camera out is such a pain in the proverbial. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 (snaps fingers) I knew I forgot something! I need to get my camera for doing the WIP of Monique...looks like I'm not doing anything more than base colors until I get that all sorted... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mako Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 heh, see I am useful sometimes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edonil Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 Eh, you're useful a lot of the time. Don't sell yourself short, Mako! Hm. I want to paint up dirt on his boots...now I need to figure out how to get it visible on brown leather... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mako Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 I use grey, black and brick red for dirt on brown stuff. And bits of brown, but they're a bit faint of course... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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