gerzel Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 (edited) Ok Here is the voting thread. Please post your final finished entries here before Midnight the 16th. Anyone may then on the 17th post their votes for the winner. For your vote put your TOP THREE choices for each category Game Balance, Originality, Creativity, Theme and Fun. You can't vote for the same entry twice in the same category but you can vote for them in different categories. Balance 1. 2. 3. Originality 1. 2. 3. Creativity 1. 2. 3. Theme 1. 2. 3. Fun 1. 2. 3. Note: I will try to go back and add the posts from the previous thread if they are not put up by their owners on the morning of the 17th. Edited July 15, 2010 by gerzel adding Note Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sliver Chocobo Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 (edited) 2 things, first of all since i entered can i vote, second if i can, i asume i can't vote for my self Viviane, Titan of Midsummer On earth, Mouther Nature comes forms and names on malifaux it goes by Viviane, she is often seen on the outscirts of the city, standing beside her hunting dogs, watching and waiting, she has never attacked the city itself. Until recently almost everyone belived her to be an urban myth since very few had seen her, she is often discribed as a women, of unnatural beauty, that appeares out a lake from nowhere, despite her enormous size, she stands top of the water held afloat by unknown magic's. a scyth is straped to her back, to an on looker she would appear to a strange carveing from a tree, still and lifeless. Dispite this never under estermate her, she many of never attacked the city itself, but many pineer towns have felt her wrath, removing all trace of the town in it's entreity and leaveing one suriver to pass on the tale, although all known surivers have gone made out of fear and describe what hapoened as "Nature reclaming, what is writefully hers" Viviane, Neverborn Master, 50MM base, chase 3 Beast Scyth of the old world Rg 3 Cb 7:crows 4/6/10 Blade of the old times Rg 2 Cb 8 :masks 4/5/6 Wk/CG 5/8 Ht 4 WP 7 Ca 7:masks Df 2 Wd 12 Abilities Armour 1 Magical Restance 1 bulletproof 2 Regenerate 2 (+1) fast Scout Nature incarnate: As only as this model is in water or woods terrain piece, you may instead of walking you may place Viviane inside another woods or water terrain piece Force of nature crews containing Viviane may hire Waidgeists at a reduced cost of -1 soulstone and there recive rare 3 Haunted forest : this models Blade of the old times strikes can target models anywhere within 1" of a woods terrain piece while it's base is touching the woods Eldest Tree : Attacks against Viviane recive +3Cb, unless Viviane is inside a piece of woods terrain then attacks against Viviane recive instead Weapon, Blade of the old times, Scyth of the old world are magical Triggers Cb (:crows:rams) decapitate Cb (:masks:masks) Entangle After damaging a defender touching a woods terrain piece with a Blade of the old times strike, while this model remains touching the terrain piece, the defender recives slow and must end all movement touching the terrain piece. Spells (1) uproot (CC: 10 :masks Rst- / Rg 5) replace one woods up 5" away this model immediatly moves it's Wk directy towards that terrain piece (1) Retake (CC: 16 :masks:masks Rst - / Rg 5) Place a 4” diameter circle of woods terrain within 5" of Viviane (0) Call of the hunt (CC: 18 :masks:masks Rst - / Rg -) sacrifice a woods terrain piece, summon a Waidgeists Pack dog - Totem cost 3 Insignifcant, beast, totem (Viviane) Bite Rg 1 Cb * :masks *-3/*-1/* Wk/CG 3/5 Ht 1 WP 5 Ca 5:masks Df 5 Wd 3 Actions Conmapion (Viviane) Pack hunters : up to six pack dogs may be connected to Viviane at any one time (-1) Slow (+1) Nimble (may take an extra walk action) Pack weapon : bite * is equil to the number of pack dogs within 4' Spells (1) pack call : (CC: 15 :masks Rst- / Rg2) summon a Pack dog (1) Magical Extension (CC: * Rst * / Rg *) Neverdrax, neverborn minion cost 12 Beast, Nephilim, Dragon, Rare 1 Out of all of monsters of Mailfaux none is more fear than the Neverdrax, created by Marcus from the blood of the Nephilim and the native flora of Malifaux, now living in the wilds of mailfaux, it corrupts all that it touches, twisting it's creator to an unknown will. Paired Claws Rg 2 Cb 6 :masks 4/5/6 Flame Breath Rg :blast:blast Cb 5 3/4:blast/5:blast:blast Wk/CG 5/9 Ht 3 WP 6 Ca 5:masks Df 4 Wd 12 Actions (+1) Melee expert Armour 2 Black blood Flight One with the forest : attacks aganst Neverdrax recive Walking Forest 4 is treated as forest terrian Haunted forest : this models Paired Claws strikes can target models anywhere within 1" of a woods terrain piece while it's base is touching the woods Tainted Blood : When hired in crews with Marcus and or Myranda they the neverborn and nepilim characteristic's and Marcus also gains Neverdrax's Paired claws weapon, the Entangle trigger as well as the Haunted forest abilty Weapon, Flame Breath is magical When making Flame breath strikes place 3 50mm disks in a straght line from this model to the target model, any other model in these disks takes any uncheatable 1/2/4 damage flip Triggers Cb (:masks:masks) Entangle After damaging a defender touching a woods terrain piece with a Paired claws strike, while this model remains touching the terrain piece, the defender recives slow and must end all movement touching the terrain piece Edited July 16, 2010 by Sliver Chocobo Last minuet edit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gerzel Posted July 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 2 things, first of all since i entered can i vote, second if i can, i asume i can't vote for my self You can vote if you entered. You cannot vote for yourself. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chucklemonkey Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 Here is my entry. It is just directly lifted from the other thread, I don't know how to quote from a different thread. It was the first summer after the re-colonisation of Malifaux and after the initial fear this brought, a wave of optimism was sweeping through the human inhabitants of the city. A summer celebration was planned, a festival for all those who had ventured through the breach. Everyone looked forward to the carefree weekend ahead, even the Guild seemed more relaxed in their ways than normal. Little did they know that the great musician Jimmy E. Quinox - booked to headline the event - had diverted much of his great wealth and influence in mastering the dark arts of necromancy, and now all would gather to see his finest symphony... Jimmy E.Quinox :thrasher: Reserrectionist Master Wk/Ch HT WP CA DF WD 4/6 2 6 7:crows 5 10 Totem : Undead Groupie Minions : Great Unwashed Young Hipsters Coffin Roadies Abilities Hard to Wound 1 Undead Master - Can hire undead from all factions for no additional cost. Casting Expert (+1) Wall of sound - When enemy models charge Jimmy they must pass a willpower 12 test, which can be cheated. If failed, model receives paralysed. Triggers (:crows:masks)Surge (:crows:crows)Bleeding Eardrums : Models damaged by a Screaming Riff attack receive slow. Axe Base Rg 1: () Cb:6 2/3/4 Screaming Riff Rg 10" Cb:5:crows 1/2:blast/5:blast:blast Spells Medicinal Purposes? (1) Ca 14/RST -/Rg 6 Flip a fate card. Target friendly model receives following benefit. Till start closing phase. Red joker : [+] on Cb and Dg flips. Severe : Model receives fast + Eat your fill ability Moderate : Model receives fast Weak : Model receives +2cb Black joker : Model receives paralysed. Solo (1) As per Nicodems decay but 1/2/4:blast for DG on enemy models. Summer of Love (2) 17/-/12 If cast and two great unwashed are within 12" of Jimmy AND 6" of each other, summon 1 Young Hipster to b2b (with one of the great unwashed). Feel the love(1) 16/-/8:aura Friendly models receive Hard to wound 1 but become easily influenced. Possibly thinking of replacing a spell or just adding another 1. Melodic Harmony as obey. Not sure if he would then have too many spells though? I have ideas for his totem and minions but will wait to see if this thread takes off and edit them in if required. Edit: Totem for Jimmy Undead Groupie SS Cost: 2 Insignificant, Totem, Undead Companion (Jimmy E Quinox) Voice cuts Glass. () 4 1/1/2 Un-natural sycophancy (1) 14/-/6 If cast, raise Jimmy's Cb, Wp & Df by 1 until start closing phase. Please sign here (1) As per Rotten Belle's undress. Encore (1) Magical Extension Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satyrwyld Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 (edited) Where the swamps give way to beaches, the ocean calls those parched by their prolonged stay in Malifaux’s unforgiving climate. Rumors have it that on these beaches, away from the prying eyes of the Guild, there are communes where life is a massive party, where glistening, golden-bodied men flex their muscles for fawning women in scanty bathing suits. The food is never ending, warm sun beats down by day and bonfires rage in the night. What the tales do not tell is that these refuges are the domain of Helios, Neverborn master of the sun and fire, and his minions have their own idea of what makes a good party. Helios Neverborn Master (40mm) Cache 3 Bearing a golden tan and rippling muscles, Helios leads parties of all description on the beaches of Malifaux. The promise of an endless summer bash, however, comes at a price: the Neverborn who dance around the bonfires and frolic in the waves burn those they touch with the heat of summer, and pick the charred flesh from the seared bones of their victims. Wk/Ch Ht WP... CA... DF .......WD 5/8...... 2.. 5.. 7 ().. 4 () 10 Weapons Hot Body Rg 1: () Cb:5() 1/3/5 Sunbeam Rg 12" () Cb:6() 1/2/4 Abilities Long Days: If not in melee range of an enemy model, Helios may use his Melee Expert action to make a ranged attack instead. Flight Summer Thaw: Models within 12” lose Frozen Heart Weapon: Sunbeam: Damage flips against undead targets receive () Actions (+1) Melee Expert (0) Surf’s Up: Friendly Neverborn models beginning their activation within 6” may move across water terrain without penalty. (0) Muscle Beach: 12" Enemy female models in LOS perform WP -> WP with this model or lose 2 Def until Start Closing Phase. Male models, constructs, and beasts are unaffected. (1) Dispel Shadows: Models within 12” do not benefit from cover. Triggers Cb(, ) Machismo: When damaging defender with a Hot Body strike, target gains Paralyzed. Df(, ) Hot Headed: After receiving melee damage, make a Hot Body strike against the attacker. After receiving ranged damage, make a Sunbeam strike against the attacker. If the attacker is a friendly model, and this trigger is available, it must be used. Spells Sap Strength (1) CC 12()/RST Wp/Rg 12 Target model receives Slow. Flash Fire (1) CC 14/RST Def/Rg 12 Dg 2/4/5 Lure (1) CC 12(, )/RST Wp/Rg 12 Push target model its Wk toward this model. If the push ends with the target in this model’s melee range, it makes a melee attack against the target. Members Only (All) CC 16(, )/RST -/Rg 8 Enemy models beginning their activation outside the aura may not enter it. Enemy models beginning their activation inside the aura may not end any move effect closer to Helios than when they began it. Malifaux Seagull Neverborn Minion Beast (Totem-Helios) (30mm) Cost 2 Above the beaches of Malifaux fly seabirds seeking unwary fish or rotten meat. They also seek those who might serve as prey for their master, the sun-god Helios. Wk/Ch ...Ht WP... CA ......DF WD 10/10 ... 1... 4 ...5 () ... 7.... 3 Weapons Sharp Beak Rg 1: () Cb:4 1/1/2 Dive Bomber Rg 6" () Cb:6 0/0/1 Abilities Dirty Bird- Models hit by a Dive Bomber strike receive Slow. Models damaged by a Dive Bomber strike instead receive Paralyzed. Flight Flock- Helios may link to more than one Seagull at a time. He may purchase up to two seagulls at start of game. Actions (All) Garbage Picker CC16(, )/RST -/Rg C Friendly Master within 6” gains one soul stone. This may not bring the friendly side’s soulstone pool above the limit for the type of match. Spells Birds of a Feather (2) CC 14(, )/RST -/Rg C Summon Malifaux Seagull, linked to Helios. Magical Extension (1) CC */RST */Rg * This spell may be cast only once per activation. Cast one of the connected Master’s (1) spells. During this casting, the model may use a soulstone to change its starting total. Doldrum Neverborn Minion (Unique) (50mm) Cost 9 Basking in the sun is the immense creature known as Doldrum. Nearly immobile, anything forcing him to his feet and action becomes the focus of a wrath most terrible, the creature’s primary desire to make the distraction go away so he can get back to doing nothing. Wk/Ch Ht WP CA....... DF.... WD 4/- ..... 3... 6.. 6 () 5 () 12 Weapons Brush Off Rg 2: () Cb:6 () 3/4/5 Abilities Armor 2 Hard to Wound 2 Hard to Kill Immune to Influence Shambling- Ignores terrain penalties while Walking Slow to Die Actions (-1) Slow (+1) Casting Expert (1) Siesta- This model makes a healing flip. Triggers Cb() Lethargy: When damaging defender with a Brush Off strike, target gains Slow. Cb(, ) Get Lost: When damaging defender with a Brush Off strike, push target 1” per wound inflicted, ignoring intervening models and terrain. Def(, ) Too Lazy to Feel Pain: When damaged by attacker, make a damage prevention flip. Spells Sargasso (1) CC 14()/RST Wp/Rg 12 (Aura) Enemy models within the aura receive Slow. Heat and Humidity (1) CC 15()/RST Wp/Rg 12 Target model gains Paralyze. Bathing Beauty Neverborn Minion (30mm) Cost 4 Many a hardened mercenary or weary miner has found the beautiful women that comprise the majority of partygoers irresistible. Letting their guard down, they begin dancing and frolicking with the scandalously clad women. Too late do they realize these beauties also find them irresistible- irresistibly delicious. Wk/Ch Ht WP ... CA.... DF WD 4/6...... 2.. 5... 4 () .. 4... 6 Weapons Fluffy Pillow Rg 1: () Cb:5() 1/1/2 The Hose Rg 10: () Cb:4 1/1/2 Abilities Companion: Helios Easily Influenced Harmless Wet T-Shirt: +4() Ca when casting Lure. Actions (0) Bikini Beach: Enemy male models in LOS are at -1 Wp until Start of Closing Phase. This ability is cumulative with other Bathing Beauties using Bikini Beach. Triggers Cb() Pillow Fight: When damaging defender with a Fluffy Pillow strike, target gains (negative damage flip) to all tests until Start Closing Phase. Cb() Slippery When Wet: When damaging defender with a The Hose strike, target gains Slow. Df() Pouty Sulk: After receiving strike damage or spell damage, attacker’s activation ends. Spells Airheaded Giggle (1) CC 12()/RST -/Rg C Caster gains Harmless. Lure (1) CC 12()/RST Wp/Rg 12 Push target model its Wk toward this model. If the push ends with the target in this model’s melee range, it makes a melee attack against the target. Edited July 16, 2010 by Satyrwyld Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dakrulz55 Posted July 17, 2010 Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 (edited) As an old west tune plays, a man stands in the distance with an ominous aura about him(que old west wah wah waaaah). The man holds a sword but in truth the sword holds the man. Gripped by the spirit of the sword Djaingo wanders and brings spirits to form other wepons that imitate but never quite coppies the true sword. With every kill the sword foms man into a wepon, greater than his former existance, sharpening his being until ready to be wielded by another. This day Djaingo is not a man but the will of his sword made manifest. And what the sword wills only its keeper kaijimbo, a lost demon who knows how to care for the sword, shall keep its secrets. Djaingo, sheath for the blade Outcast -Graverobber Master Mercenary Souless 30mm ssCache-2 Wk/Cg- 5/8 Ht- 2 Wp- 7* Ca- 5 Df- 7* Wd- 10 Muramasa Rg 2:melee Cb 7* Dg 2/4/7 Abilities -Bulletproof (2) -Chorus of steel- After this model succesfully resists an enemy spell, gain one soulstone. -The song of the dead- If this model is killed , discard 2 soulstones to burry and fully heal this model. During the following closing phase replace a model with a daisho with Djaingo and this model suffers 5 wd. Actions -(0)The metal I am- discard 1 soulstone, this model may focus strike for (1) for the turn. - (+1)I bring you the edge- discard 1 soulstone or 2 controll cards, this model may imediatly charge an enemy model. Triggers -Cb(:crows:rams)Sever your head- When damaging defender damage flips recieve:+fate:+fate. Draw 1 controll card if defender is killed. -Cb(:rams:masks)I cut so deep-Muramasa strikes recieve +2 dmg -Df(:masks:crows)moves you make-After attacker misses with a ranged attack push this model 4".After attacker misses with a melee attack make 1 muramasa strike. Spells -(0)I am the blade (cc: 10/Rst:-/Rg:C)If a (:crows) was used to cast this model recieves +1:crowsWp,If a (:masks) was used to cast this model recieves +1:masksDf,If a (:rams) was used to cast this model recieves +1:ramsCB, this spell remains until cast again. -(1)I am the dream of the brave (cc: 14/Rst:-/Rg; :aura6)Models daisho strikes may use this models Cb/Df triggers and are effected by "i am the blade".(replace instances of muramasa with daisho for other models) -(0)I am the promise unmade (cc: 18/Rst:-/Rg:6)Sacrifice 2 corpse counters to summon 1 ronin within 6" that gains souless type. Kaijimbo Outcast - Insignificant Neverborn Totem(Djaingo) 30mm sscost-4 Wk/Cg- 4/6 Ht- 1 Wp- 5 Ca- 4(:masks) Df- 5 Wd- 4 Wakizashi Rg 1 Cb 4* Dg 1/2/4 Abilities -Shackled- Summon this model to a friendly Djaingo during the closing phase it is killed. -Physical aberration -this model doesnt generate any corpse counters when it is killed. -Reaving- After a living or undead model is killed within 6" this model gains 1 blood counter. Spells -(0)Blood for oil- (cc: 10/Rst:-/Rg; :aura4)discard 1 blood counter, this model suffers 1 wd. Friendly melee strikes recieve +2 dmg. -(1)Blessing of Muramasa (cc::masks:masks 12/Rst:-/Rg:6)Friendly model recieves one of the benefets of "i am the sword". this spell may only be cast once per turn and lasts until the closing phase. Edited July 17, 2010 by dakrulz55 story Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gerzel Posted July 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2010 Overslept, so I don't have time this morning to check for anyone left on the other thread. I'll try to do it late this evening/early tomorrow when I get home but can't promise anything. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dakrulz55 Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 well im up for putung a vote in for helios both for fun and theme, because who doesnt like wet tshirts on scant clad young neverborn. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sliver Chocobo Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 Voting time Jimmy E.Quinox Originality Theme Fun Helios Balancing Originality Theme Djaingo, sheath for the blade Balancing Originality Creativity Fun Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gerzel Posted July 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 Oops. Sorry Silver Chocobo, I meant for people to put a number beside their vote the 1st 2nd and 3rd Original in their opinion. If that's too complex you can just give your first choice for each field. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sliver Chocobo Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 Sure my final vote Balance 1. Djaingo, sheath for the blade 2. Helios 3. Jimmy E.Quinox Originality 1. Jimmy E.Quinox 2. Djaingo, sheath for the blade 3. Helios Creativity 1. Djaingo, sheath for the blade 2. Jimmy E.Quinox 3. Helios Theme 1. Helios 2. Jimmy E.Quinox 3. Djaingo, sheath for the blade Fun 1. Djaingo, sheath for the blade 2. Helios 3. Jimmy E.Quinox Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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