Silver_lining_minipainting

great job, but due to the brightness overall of the model the fire effect on the bottom gets lost a bit.

Great job! 

I really like it, though there's a lot of blues and purples, maybe some variation on her skirt and stockings would make it more interesting.

Agreed, love the color palette and the exectuion.

love the idea of the shadow in the background. I'd like to see more saturation and more variation in color on the puppet. Also, its not really clear what is casting the shadow.

Nice work, I indeed like the helm area the most. The loin cloth and the base feel a bit out of place with the rest of the piece. There's also what seems like a big fat mould line on his right arm.

Good idea on the OSL, but adding basing would indeed be the best way to improve on this one.

On 8/23/2022 at 11:18 PM, SpannerRider said:

The OSL work is good, but the rest of the model feels unfinished, not considering the base even, the rest of the painted model seems too bright to be getting that much glow off of the ol' glow saber. 

I don't know actually, aren't light sabers like really really bright

really really great lighting. Some transitions are a bit crude, but the contrast and placement of highlights is spot on! Also like the blueish reflectionn of moonlight on the left side.

great presentation of a great sculpt. For me the shadows can be darker still, mostly focusing shadow reflections on the spiders head and legs.

Good composition and use of color. Increasing the contrast would really elevate this piece. Also adding some basing will go a long way. good job!

Excellent placement of highlights and definition of volumes. If you're a beginner and not an overachiever, wow!

really like the dynamic of this piece and the warm/cold contrast from the smoke and the blue thingy.

nice OSL!

I really like the use of saturated warm colors but the "shadow" parts are very bright/light grey. Maybe thats also the picture.

really nice texture on the coat. I also really appreciate the angle of the picture!

A lot of nice details to be discovered!

Great storytelling!

Lots of Color!

Really cool effect on the gun!

Lovely brushwork, great contrast and saturation. 

Like the monochromatic approach.

3 hours ago, KID55 said:

Idea is absolutely amazing! But... Where is urban environment?

In the background there is a city skyline by night but it doesn't show in the picture.

really nice job on the girl and the bike. It think a smaller background would have done the piece even more justice.

The shadow effect of the horse is a really nice touch. I would have loved to see the miniatures be a larger part of the diorama. Now its harder to see details and the dynamic between models. Great job though!