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Webmonkey

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  1. I couldn't find something that I like with it. So, maybe, with these pastels,.. I can work out something that'll be unique.
  2. Not yet. Thought I might pause real quick and see what I can get done on a regular mini. Speaking of which,.. I still need to find a way to finish my Wong.
  3. "and people,.. listen to me,.. reach inside your television set, grab hold of the picture tube,.. and feel the power!!!"
  4. brings to mind cthulu in a suit,.. preaching the gospel,..
  5. bow>> you get a chance to read my other story?? ---------- Post added at 06:03 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:01 PM ---------- and what's cthulutech?? is it tech that summons cthulu?? or gives you cthulu-type powers?,.. or just using some kind of advanced tech to fight cthulu??
  6. um,.. you missed a spot,... *grin* Seriously though, they're looking really good.
  7. anyhow,.. time for bed once again. Let me know what you think tomorrow,. *grin*
  8. I think my WaySinger story reads much better.
  9. bow>> and yes,.. I'm aware that my "tenses" were all over the map. But that was written a few years ago. Hopefully I can do better now. Also another reason for the re-write,.. to clean up all that crap,..
  10. Though, as presented, seems to have a bit of a "Cinematic" quality to it somehow. For me at least, it's easy to picture the world that you're now standing in.
  11. I just think it needs a re-write,.. so that I introduce the world to them in a more tidy fashion somehow.
  12. well,.. like has been said,.. Quote from Supernatural,.. Chuck: Endings are hard. Any chapped-ass monkey with a keyboard can poop out a beginning, but endings are impossible. You try to tie up every loose end, but you never can. The fans are always gonna bitch. There's always gonna be holes. And since it's the ending, it's all supposed to add up to something. I'm telling you, they're a raging pain in the ass.
  13. me too,.. And I was just re-reading Endless City,.. I think it needs a total re-write,..
  14. I don't know,.. you did a damned good job with the techno club and the character descriptions in the last one I read from you. And the programmable ink was brilliant!!!
  15. my problem always was in the "verbal" part of the writing. I tend to describe the actions and settings more then let the characters talk,..
  16. bumped up in the writing thread,.. was buried like 300 pages down or something,..
  17. Let me jump it up to the top of the story thread,... I actually started on it. Got the base layout of the story, and a short way into the first chapter a post or two down the page,..
  18. or,.. a crazy scientist made all these uber-tech parts, and scattered them all over the world. Each one has it's own abilities and functions. And you have to fight against the others to get each new piece,.. concluding in a whole "cyber-armor" type thing. After all,.. in the end,.. there can be only one!!! Oh wait,... wrong story,.. *grin*
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