the_madhatter1

Awesome idea! just gunna make a couple of tweaks now.

Well actually, I win!

it does sound much better

really? Oh god, thats sxounds really bizzare, i think i'll stick with lu-see-us

I'm just interested how people pronounce Lucius. I personally call him Lu-See-us but i have seen people say Lu-shus before and i was wondering what was the correct way? i think Lu-See-Us sounds better, but what are other peoples opinions?

I've edited the rules a bit, check it out and tell me what you think, still need to add a joker trick, change his spells a bit and add a trigger to the acid spraying flower

I guess so, i never new lelu and lilitu were woes, the woe of malicious humour it is then! (But no pies, sorry)

All of the woes seem to be kids, but he could be

I had had a thought of that from when i first was thinking about making him, good idea

looks good to me, you might want to consider dropping something in the second one so that you at least have some ss though.

well written, not my kind of story though but still well done

great piece, wonderful discrption can't wait for the lawyer!

Really cool bat rep, the pics were awesome too!

um not thinking so much of pies, personally i loike the cleaver as its a lot more sinister, and i had thought to have baloons on the model, and it could be become some sought of ranged attack, but i don't want it to be to silly

all that ratty said maybe plus some crooked men and hanged can be good, also i would personally recommend a convict gunslinger

I am not a Zoraida player myself, or in fact even a neverborn player but personally i think this looks like a solid list, i've seen a similar list been suggested before.

I have only read this one so far but i am enjoying them much

a very dark story, i like it

But on the other hand i don't want him to be a joker type character, more a homocidal clow n

But she is actually good in combat and i think it wood be cooler if she did more than just stand back and make dolls

I'm thinking of changing his meat cleaver to something like "Rusty serrated Knife' so that he can have a trigger called "I'm guna put a smile on your face" the joy buzzer is a cool idea

I'm not sure why everyones dissing ressers i book 3, sure they didn't get a beatstick, but rafkin is great and jaakuna ubume is a great board control piece with loads of movement talents. the crooligans are good at capturing objectives, dead doxies i have to admit are only useful when raised via arise my sweets. drowned are utterly useless though. but personally i thounght neverborn got the best with tuco and iggy. especially i think iggy is underpriced, its a shame that weaver widow lacks a charge

good idea about the joker thing, also i forgot to add unique to his charactiristis

I came up with this idea a while back, a neverborn clo-wn. with a cleaver. He basically a powered up version of baby kade and replaces kade's harmless shenanigans with terrifying stuff hope ya like him and please give any ways you think i should change his rules at all. Sorry the only way it let me write clo-wn is with a -, it censored it out otherwise :/ Chuckles - Minion 30mm Base Soulstone Cost: 10 Woe, nightmare, soulless, unique Wk/Cg: 5/6 Ht:2 Wp:5 Ca:5:masks Df:6 Wd:9 Meat Cleaver Acid Spraying Flower Rg :melee1 Rg :ranged6 Cb 7:crows Cb 6:masks Dg 2/3/5 Dg 1/1/2 Talents: Abilities: Creepy: Living models within 3” of this model receive -1 Wp. Hard to Wound 1 Regeneration 1 Terrifying -> 12 It’s only a Joke...:If this model flips or plays a joker, it always counts as the Black Joker. If it is this model who flips or plays a joker, this models controller replace the joker with the top card from his or hers discard pile. If any other model flips or plays a joker for a duel which would effect this model he is immune to all the effects of the Talent/Spell. Weapon, Acid Spraying Flower, Ignores armour and hard to wound abilities. Poison 2. Models attacked by this weapon cannot activate defensive triggers. Actions: (+1) Melee Expert (0) Have a balloon: Target model within 2” performs a Wp -> Wp duel with this model, if target looses the duel target receives Slow. Target also receives the Insignificant characteristic until the End Closing Phase. Triggers: Cb (:crows) Excessive Bleeding[Meat Cleaver]: After hitting defender, Defender receives the insignificant characteristic until the end of the game. At the end of the game models effected must win a Wp -> 12 duel, that cannot be cheated, or they count as being killed for encounter purposes. Cb (:crows:rams) Chop ‘n‘ Lop: When damaging defender with a Meat Cleaver Strike, defender suffers +2 Dg and receives Slow. Cb (:crows:masks) Hack ‘n’ Slash: When damaging defender with a Meat Cleaver Strike, the damage flip receives + and defender suffers +2 Dg. Cb (:masks:masks) “It’s in my Eye!” [Acid-Spraying Flower] Damage flip receives + and defender receives Slow. Spells: (0) Tear Away Face (CC:14:masks/Rst: -/Rg: :aura4) Terrifying -> 13. This replaces this models Terrifying -> 13 Ability.

I really like your friekorps colour scheme, very cool, keep up the good work. oh yeah your friekorps sign is bad ass!