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Iron Painter Round 1 - OSL: Illuminated


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Round 1 [Object Source Lighting (OSL)] - Finished

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  • Taken with LG Electronics VS835
  • Focal Length 3.5 mm
  • Exposure Time 91678/1000000
  • f Aperture f/2.2
  • ISO Speed 1100

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Hey mrcoblin I am giving some comments on what I see. I hope you pass it along to others as you can.

The good:

  • The aesthetic of the piece was great. the color choices and the use of muscle toning and highlights/lowlights really brings the piece to life

Constructive Criticism:

  • I didn't see much OSL in this piece, I assume the purple on the mans face/shoulders is the OSL and it looks a lot like decaying flesh from being devoured. 
  • Showing all the detail of your mini with multiple pictures is nice, but when you use too many photos it takes away from the collage as a whole. I would pick two or three strategic photo angles to really highlight your submission


good luck next round!

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Thank you very much for your feedback! I really do appreciate it. The OSL was supposed to be over the guys head and shoulders, coming from where the monster is popping up from his back. I also tried to throw in glowing effects around the monster as well. I don't think I made any of them strong enough, and I think I should have pushed the contrast more. 

Thank you for the tip about the collage as well, that isn't something that I really thought about but it makes a lot of sense after you pointed it out. 

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