Iron Painter Round 1 - OSL: Illuminated

Hey mrcoblin I am giving some comments on what I see. I hope you pass it along to others as you can.

The good:

• The aesthetic of the piece was great. the color choices and the use of muscle toning and highlights/lowlights really brings the piece to life

Constructive Criticism:

• I didn't see much OSL in this piece, I assume the purple on the mans face/shoulders is the OSL and it looks a lot like decaying flesh from being devoured. 
• Showing all the detail of your mini with multiple pictures is nice, but when you use too many photos it takes away from the collage as a whole. I would pick two or three strategic photo angles to really highlight your submission

good luck next round!

Thank you very much for your feedback! I really do appreciate it. The OSL was supposed to be over the guys head and shoulders, coming from where the monster is popping up from his back. I also tried to throw in glowing effects around the monster as well. I don't think I made any of them strong enough, and I think I should have pushed the contrast more. 

Thank you for the tip about the collage as well, that isn't something that I really thought about but it makes a lot of sense after you pointed it out.