Arcane Effigy Iron Painter Round 1

I love the bookshelf background for this model!

Hey dragonkey, I'm tossing some comments your way on what I saw in your figure. hope you can do the same

The good:

• the detail in the books and candles and face is really good
• I like the sculpt on the fire on the base
• the backdrop is on point!

Constructive Criticism: 

• The OSL yellow on this is very heavy in small areas, it didn't transition well. this makes it look almost like it is part of the clothing as opposed to a glow from the candles.
• the sculpted fire on the bottom needed a little more orange like the candles had.
• The submission itself has a few too many photos, it is good to give different angles of your piece especially when the detail is there, but when there is too much going on it is hard to focus in on the piece.

good luck next round!

Hey Zatch thanks for the feedback - it's great to know what you thought and thanks for giving me some ideas on how to improve. I'll be sure comment on your submission as well. Good luck on round 2!