dragonkey

Hey Zatch  

Sorry for the delay but as promised here is my feedback on your Round One submission:

The Good:

- Nice gradient/transition on the lighting bolt above him.

- I love the choice of model - Tesla is such a fascinating figure and fits perfectly with the theme.

-The areas in which the lighting is reflecting on to him look right.

Needs Improvement:

- I'm not sure what kind of paints you use but they seem..."powdery" for lack of a better word. This makes parts of the model look textured and less realistic, especially on his face.

- The lighting on his clothing and face could be transitioned better, and also has a bit of a powdery look to it.

- I think you would have benefited from taking a photo slightly further away. This would have shown off the detail without showcasing any imperfections, as well as it would make the overall composition look better.

Overall, great job! I can't wait to see what you do for Round Two and I hope we can exchange feedback again

Hey Zatch thanks for the feedback - it's great to know what you thought and thanks for giving me some ideas on how to improve. I'll be sure comment on your submission as well. Good luck on round 2!