dragonkey 10 Posted October 14, 2017 Report Hey Zatch Sorry for the delay but as promised here is my feedback on your Round One submission: The Good: - Nice gradient/transition on the lighting bolt above him. - I love the choice of model - Tesla is such a fascinating figure and fits perfectly with the theme. -The areas in which the lighting is reflecting on to him look right. Needs Improvement: - I'm not sure what kind of paints you use but they seem..."powdery" for lack of a better word. This makes parts of the model look textured and less realistic, especially on his face. - The lighting on his clothing and face could be transitioned better, and also has a bit of a powdery look to it. - I think you would have benefited from taking a photo slightly further away. This would have shown off the detail without showcasing any imperfections, as well as it would make the overall composition look better. Overall, great job! I can't wait to see what you do for Round Two and I hope we can exchange feedback again Quote
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