Chucklemonkey Posted August 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2011 Defineately a good finish. With the loose ends remaining from this story, it will be great to see a little interweaving of the plot points in future stories. I am also intrigued to find out if Stryker's path will cross that of April's and how it will unfold. Oh they definitely will. I thought it may be nice for him to have a nemesis of sorts. Thanks for reading it all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DavidKerrSmith Posted August 2, 2011 Report Share Posted August 2, 2011 A very fitting end to your best effort so far. I can just picture Stryder looking out of the window as the camera pulls back and pans across Malifaux's skyline A true noir ending. The writing strength continues to improve with each offering on the forums. I like how the deaths of somewhat insignificant characters still have an emotional knock-on effect. I look forward to the next chapter in the story. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chucklemonkey Posted August 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2011 A very fitting end to your best effort so far. I can just picture Stryder looking out of the window as the camera pulls back and pans across Malifaux's skyline A true noir ending. The writing strength continues to improve with each offering on the forums. I like how the deaths of somewhat insignificant characters still have an emotional knock-on effect. I look forward to the next chapter in the story. Thanks for continuing to read them. I am already working on the next Stryder story so it won't be too long in appearing. Hopefully it will improve on this one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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