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Billingsly

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  1. REALLY nice Billingsly! You nailed the colors and atmosphere! 

    In the spirit of constructive crit - I'd like to offer 3 MINOR suggestions...

    1) The wall on the left has a sort of hard line of shadow, that *almost* makes it look like the corner of the bldg. I would suggest either blending it lighter or darker.

    2) the left leg has a small curve to it, which makes the knee look awkward. I might straighten that just a hair.

    3) design-wise, the corner of the wall above his head is forming a visual "line" right on the edge of his face. Perhaps extend or shorten it to break that line.

    I hope you don't mind... I altered your image slightly to show you these ideas. Picture speaks a 1000 words and all that.

    http://imgur.com/cGuVWI0

     

    But really nice work!

     

    Hey thanks for the feedback! I always appreciate constructive criticism (only way to  improve). Anyway I took your advice and applied those changes. I think the biggest thing was just moving the building. It really improves the composition. Thats clearly something I'll need to look out for in the future. Anyway here's the image with the changes. 

     

    Also if any of you have some suggestions for more Malifaux related stuff I'd like to hear them. I can't guarantee I'll draw them but I'll never turn away a good idea.

     

     

    guild_patrol_small_mk2_zps986f31bd.png

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