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  1. Most of what I would say has been covered above, but there's one model I've been having a lot of success with lately who hasn't been mentioned. Namely, Angel Eyes. Before I get into it, I'll admit there are some issues taking Angel Eyes with Lilith. First and foremost is that Lilith likes to clog up the board with terrain, and that messes with shooters something fierce. Lilith also doesn't have a lot of direct support for shooty subordinates beyond giving them something to hide behind. Finally, Lilith generally doesn't have a lot of stones to go around, and without them Angel Eyes takes hits like a piñata. That being said, there are some definite synergies to be considered. The obvious one is that she's just another Nephilim who can take Nephilim-specific upgrades. In fact she's a particularly good candidate for Obsidian Talons, because she'll be keeping it nice and safe behind cover with her. Lilith can also help her in some roundabout ways; she can send one of her several flyers up to a good vantage point and then use Tangle Shadows to send Angel Eyes up after it, she can use Transfixing Gaze to yank enemies out of cover for a good peppering, and in an emergency she can sprout forests to keep enemies from getting an easy charge on her sniper. But her best feature is the lack of randomization. Nephilim can deal a good amount of hurt; but they're very squishy, and they rely on raw damage to win rather than circumventing defenses. Angel Eyes doesn't deal a lot of damage, but she's great for following up on a big alpha strike to deal that last crucial point to an Armored or Hard to Kill model still in combat. Since I started using her she's probably gotten the most actual kills on my team, despite not dealing more than two or three damage per shot, just because she's such an efficient sweeper. "But wait," I hear you say, "Most of those points apply to McTavish as well, and he's also a burly Unimpeded bruiser with deployable cover and movement shenanigans." And this is very true. However after the merc tax he's a hefty eleven soulstones compared to Angel Eyes's nine. Plus being a Gremlin model he's locked out of all those upgrades that Lilith and her pals want around but can't be bothered to carry themselves. So, she's no silver bullet (pun not intended), and she takes some getting use to. But she opens up enough interesting tactical doors that I can heartily recommend her. Worst case, bringing a riflewoman in a Nephilim crew is a great way to keep your opponents guessing.
  2. Hans roared into his mask as his gauntleted fist missed his target and smashed a crater in the bare stone ground. "Now, now," said his opponent in a high-pitched and incredibly smug voice. "It's not very polite of you to assault a man while he's making a case!" The small man's laughter was like a rusty music box creaking its way through a tune. "Shut UP!" Hans screamed as he swung again, arcs of lightning dancing around his fists. "No!" His opponent dodged, his aristocratic clothing swirling and his eyes gleaming with malice behind his mask. "I haven't explained your offenses yet! You see, it all comes down to-" Hans swung again, with all the force the mechanisms in his armor would provide. With impeccable timing, his opponent dropped, the earth-shattering blow doing nothing more than carrying away his bowler hat. In the instant his view was clear, Hans had a view of the whole battle for the ancient ruins. He snarled as he saw the winged creature that had laid Von Schill low leap over a ruined wall and hurl itself at Lazarus, bloodied claws bared. "Let me finish!" screeched the lawyer, sliding to his feet. "The main point is this so-called Strongarm Suit of yours. What do you know of its design?" "Plenty!" He charged up again and hurled another blow. The lawyer stepped aside, and a few meters distant Hans saw a swirl of purple cloak and grey steel as Taelor swung her massive hammer, forcing back a demon riflewoman who had been crouching behind a wild hedge. "Evidently not! For example, I imagine you didn't even know the design of the arm joints is identical to one patented by Breachside Mechanical - a clear case of Intellectual Property Infringement!" Hans tried to spring forward to press the attack, but stumbled painfully as the suit's arm braces suddenly seized. The lawyer laughed at his distress, dancing around him. "And did you know also," the man cackled as Hans rose, "that the number 3 aetheric condenser is prone to failure under loads in excess of 35 Merlin's units? A gross violation of Construct Safety Dictates!" Hans was rocked forward as part of the complex machinery on the harness's back exploded, burning a hole in his reinforced Freikorps uniform. The lawyer was positively screaming with laughter now. Hans forced the pain down and took advantage of his enemy's distraction, dealing him a savage lightning-enhanced backhand that spun the lawyer entirely around. He screamed indignantly, and suddenly an invisible force battered Hans across the face, forcing him down on one knee. "Striking an officer of the law?!" The lawyer shrieked, frantically batting out a fire on his ruffled shirt. "You're only making it worse for yourself!" "SILENCE!" Hans screamed as he stood. "No lie or foul magic will save you!" He sprang forward, swinging his fist downwards, but again struck only stone. "These are no lies! It's my job to know your every little crime. For example you, my dear Hans, are personally guilty of no less than twelve instances of Disorderly Conduct Within a Public Space - five of them unrecorded, and unpunished!" Hans suddenly doubled over, nauseous, his head spinning. He felt as sick as he had the last time he'd gone celebrating with his fellow Freikorpsmen. Disjointed images swam in front of his eyes - broken bottles, an overturned market stall, a woman's bloodied face - and he vomited inside his mask. As he sank to his knees, he surveyed the battle through filth-spattered lenses. The demon woman had evaded Taelor, and was still aiming a smoking revolver at the crumpled and sparking form of Lazarus. Their librarian lay dead, torn apart by razor claws. The steam trunk was sprawled on its back, torn open and struggling futilely to right itself. And a robed figure in the powdered wig and full face mask of a senior Guild official surveyed the carnage, calmly gesturing here and there to direct his underlings. The lawyer circled into Hans's field of vision. He tried to rise, but his legs wouldn't respond. The Guild official in the distance gave a quick nod to the lawyer, and he cackled with glee. "Well then, that's that! Time for your sentence!" The lawyer straightened, adopting a formal posture quite at odds with the chaos arrayed behind him. "For your many flagrant violations of the laws of Malifaux, and by the authority of the Governor-General of said colony as referred by Secretary Lucius Mattheson, I do sentence you to die!" He twirled his cane, bringing its heavy head above him in preparation for a vicious downward blow. "Any last words?" Hans could only gurgle pitifully. "So noted." The blow came, and he knew no more.
  3. Hey all! Just posted up my first Iron Quill entry, Obsession - Things Buried. 1,325 words. Used all the ingredients, although the line fairly loosely. Thanks for reading!
  4. Hello all! Long time follower of the Iron Quill challenge, but this is my first submission. Let me know what you think! Words: 1,325 Ingredients used: The MonsterA MaskRailroad Tracks"In walked a one-eyed stranger" (very loosely) ***** Josiah unfolded the map again. He did so every few minutes, as if something about it would have changed from last time. Weller truly did not care for it. His nerves were already terribly frayed. Walking out in the Malifaux wilds, following a half-made and deserted rail line, tended to have that effect on folks. But he could say nothing. This was Josie's hunt, and long experience told Weller he was better off not raising a fuss. All he could do was tap his fingers on his worn old Collier and try not to think about it. If the older relic hunter noticed his companion's frustration, he paid it no mind. He'd been searching for a find like this almost since he came to Malifaux (which, so he liked to tell people, was a powerful long time ago). A little griping from his apprentice wasn't about to distract him. The anthropolgist had come to Malifaux to study the ruins of the city itself. But he quickly became more intrigued by the puzzle of the neverborn. The nephilim in particular attracted him. Here was an entire tribal society, previously unknown to human science, which actively and violently resisted any attempt at communication. They were entirely too strange not to investigate. Now he marched into the night, young protege in tow, towards his greatest prize yet. An intact nephilim reliquary vault. Josiah had studied the nephilim for many years. He knew that they crafted very little, and built a great deal less. What could be so important to them that they would raise a building just to house it? It was a mystery he was quite eager to solve. ***** In the shadows of the nearby woods crouched two figures. Their blue skin was dulled to charcoal in the half-light of the crescent moons. Only a faint gleam of fangs or the slow, agitated beat of leathery wings would betray their presence to an onlooker. We should take them now, hissed the youngest in a sinister tongue, while the old one is distracted. They are far, and we are few, replied the eldest. Their evil guns would take us before we could rend them. The youngest spat an oath. Then what can we do? They are too close to the temple! The eldest thought for a moment. We must tell mother. She will know what to do. At this the youngest recoiled with another oath. No, we mustn't! She would punish us for letting them get this far! Then what would you have us do? The youngest thought for a moment. We could...tell HIM. He is not far. The eldest considered, and a slow grin slit his pointed face. Yes...yes, we will tell him. Well reasoned. As the pair slipped away and flew off into the dark, the youngest grinned as well. Mother might be wroth with them for letting two humans so near. But he, he would be pleased. ***** After another hour or so of walking, the two men came to their destination. Before them stood a round stone door, ten feet wide if it was an inch, set into a secluded hillside. The surrounding stone was richly carved with symbols of which even Josiah understood very little. But the door itself was unadorned, save for a deep reversed carving of a face in its center. "Jesu's beard, that's a sight." breathed Josiah. Weller looked around uncomfortably. "I'll concede it's impressive, but oughtn't we to hurry? I don't like to think what'll happen if we're spotted." Josiah shook himself, as if waking from a daze. "Right, of course. Fetch out the key." Without delay, Weller unlimbered his heavy pack. After a moment's rummaging he pulled out an oilcloth bundle and handed it to Josiah. Reverently, the old relic hunter unwrapped the bundle, revealing a jade mask with a long bird-like nose. Slowly, with all the awe of a pious man at services, he placed the mask into the slot in the door. It settled into place with a click. For a moment, nothing happened. Then, slowly, the door began to roll away into the hillside, revealing a tunnel leading down and away into darkness. Josiah's eyes glimmered as Weller's expression sank. Each man produced a bulky electric torch, and they proceeded down the tunnel. "It's incredible, Weller," murmured Josiah as they walked. "Everyone who studies them knows the nephilim have some stone tools and ritual items. But this is beyond anything we imagined." Weller glanced about. "Maybe they took the place from somebody else?" Josiah dismissed the idea with a shake of his head. "Doubtful. Look at the architecture. Just like one of their forest halls, but in stone instead of wood. And these carvings." The older man ran a hand along painted reliefs lining the wall. Each depicted nephilim of all sizes engaged in acts of ritual and slaughter. A few were almost domestic, showing the raising of a long hall or the preparation of a feast. "I've never seen such cohesive visual language from them before. This place must be of great significance." "All the more reason to explore and leave quickly, sir," replied Weller. "Mind your tone, boy. You can't rush...history..." Josiah trailed off. The tunnel around them had come to an abrupt end, its carvings spilling over into the large chamber in which they now stood. Its vaulted ceiling bore even more carvings, and against one wall lay a ritual altar. All around stood stone shelves lined with artifacts, all dimly lit by soulstone chips embeded in the walls. Josiah looked all around, awestruck. "My God, what a find! I'll be publishing papers on this place for years! Isn't it magnificent, Weller?" Josiah turned, and was shocked to see that Weller's face was twisted in agony. The man fell with a heavy thud, and where he had stood was a creature out of nightmare. Taller than any man Josiah had ever met, with gangly limbs, bloodstained robes, and a black feathered mask and headdress. The intruder's obsidian knife gleamed crimson in the harsh yellow light of the torch, and his leathery wings stretched back into darkness. Josiah dropped his torch, backing up against the altar. The shadowy figured strode straight up to Josiah as he stood paralyzed with fear. It gripped him by the throat, slamming him down onto the cold stone. "You not welcome here, hu-mahn." The shaman's deep voice was thick with an accent Josiah couldn't identify. He wanted to be excited to hear a nephilim speaking English, however shakily. But it was getting hard to think. "Secrets of the brood not for you kind." "Please," he gasped, his eyes dimming. "I mean...no harm... just wanted to...understand..." The shaman leaned in close, wiping his dagger clean on Josiah's jacket. "We know. You like us, hu-mahn. You have many secrets. Secrets of hu-mahn and of brood." The shaman dragged the knife along his own arm, letting his black blood well around the blade. "Brood take them all." Before he could ask what that meant, the shaman plunged the blade into Josiah's heart. He tried to scream, but he had no breath left. Any moment he expected to pass from the world, either from his pierced heart or the sheer agony of the shaman's burning blood in his veins. But he didn't die, his heart still beating out a terrified staccato. The shaman withdrew the dagger and released him, stepping back as he collapsed to the floor. "You stay here, while blood cools. Leave you this one for first meal. We talk after." The shaman removed his mask, the light of the soulstones illuminating his cruel grin and the single dark eye left in his head. "Welcome to the brood, hu-mahn." The shaman strode away up the tunnel, leaving Josiah to convulse next to the body of his friend. Before the blood rage took him, a single thought echoed in his head. Oh, the things I shall LEARN!
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