Jump to content

skarsol

Vote Enabled
  • Posts

    13
  • Joined

  • Last visited

skarsol's Achievements

Rookie

Rookie (2/14)

  • First Post
  • Collaborator
  • Week One Done
  • One Month Later
  • One Year In

Recent Badges

2

Reputation

  1. Would be kinda cool to see some/any pics of the multipose minis... do we even know where in the production process those are? They on the boat with the books? Or did I miss an update on those?
  2. I guess we'll see if that lofty standard applies to the editing as well once we get the actual physical books. I'm not optimistic.
  3. When you gave the option it was along with the implication that it wasn't super likely for changes to still be made, so glad to hear some made it in. I would have given you more had I not thought there was a good chance my time would end up wasted.
  4. Any of the stuff I pointed out, or was that all too late?
  5. Just to harp on it a little more, since you brought up taking extra time to get it right, I picked another random page from the Fatemasters_Almanac_High.pdf. I grabbed page 108 this time! Col 1, Para 1, Line 18: "though" should be "through" Col 2, Para 2, Line 8: "quite" should be "quiet" Line 21: "the point" should be "to the point that" or similar. Outside of the obvious errors above, some of the sentences on this page are super awkward and the sheer randomness which seems to fuel the comma usage in these books continues full tilt.
  6. At $30/ea for the Fall Schematic models I suspect they can pay for some expediting.
  7. That's actually not an error. Replace it with "The Suit of Masks has influence" to see why. Alas, para 7 is missing a comma after Eight.
  8. How many of those people did you pay to proof your thesis? Would you have been happy with mistakes remaining had you done so?
  9. The increasing prevalence of "meh, good enough" in publishing (especially game publishing) makes me sad. At least I didn't see any obvious typos whereas our friends at GW manage to put out rulebooks with "teh" in them. I just opened the Fatemasters_Almanac_High.pdf to a random page (146): Col 1, Para 1, Line 8: should be ", and creating". Para 2, Line 3: "It's" should be "Its". Line 6: "It's" should be "Its". Col 2, Para 2, Lines 3-4: should probably be "doing the jobs of living hounds" unless living hounds only have one job, in which case "doing the job of a living hound" sounds better. (nitpicky) Para 3, Lines 7-8: should be "backs that, once stuck into a criminal, can".
  10. The better question is why wasn't there more editing done before sending it to the printers? Could have even released a version to the KS backers and had them proof it if your internal editors weren't confident. I posted a few errors on the KS comments but didn't seem like you guys particularly cared.
×
×
  • Create New...

Important Information