I went back to the drawing board and found a much more suitable template so this is my version 2 intro. The first one I think I'll keep for Infinity.
http://paintedaddiction.blogspot.com/2011/06/malifaux-intro-2.html
Thanks for the input folks, I've got lots to work on, I definitively need better music and a tripod to shoot the video from. I'm planning on having an intro of two gangs then a battle report type of thing following that of my games.
I've just started to get into Malifaux, thought i'd post a little video intro I've been working on and see what everyone thinks of it.
http://paintedaddiction.blogspot.com/2011/06/malifaux-intro.html