Flowers11

Good, but next time try to push contrast a bit. Deepen shadows and add highlights

I adore these little swamp things. Great composition on such a small scale, but the yellow base rim is almost "screaming" compared to the rest of the model, kind of pulling the view from the models. I agree that a little more highlight would have popped the model more, the shades are fine for me.

Why do I hear a narration on the voice of David Attenborough in my head when I look at them, I wonder...  

I also feel like the contrast could be pushed a bit more. Conversely, you could also lower the contrast on the photo to make the light hitting the models not appear so bright.