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JPowah round 1 osl challenge

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First OSL model... Be gentle... 

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Hey Jpowah I am giving some comments on what I see. I hope you pass it along to others as you can.

The good:

  • The OSL signing onto the figure and the bones is really well done, really smooth and subtle.
  • the land scaping on the base and the lava effects are really well done

Constructive Criticism:

  • doing liquid effects in landscaping can be hard, using materials like realistic water effects or woodland scenic can give you a really glossy finish which causes glare in photos, just something to watch out for.
  • your main figure needs more highlights and lowlights, the headpiece and face are big focus points and they don't have a lot color variation. even something as simple as dirtying up some places would bring some more detail to the figure. 

good luck next round!

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