TheMasses Posted November 16, 2005 Report Share Posted November 16, 2005 Thought I'd post this as a way of saying "Hi" and getting some of that feedback you all a famous for. Well here goes :rockon: What ya think? :goodbad: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ritual Posted November 16, 2005 Report Share Posted November 16, 2005 It's a pretty nice paintjob! The wizard looks smooth and has well chosen colours. I think both the green cloth and the skin could be highlighted a bit further whereas the hair is a bit too severely highlighted or possibly too severely shaded (depending on what colour you were going for). The water is a bit too blue I think. I'd have gone for a less saturated look and blended in some green in places, made the water darker near the base and lighter higher up on the wave. Still, it's nice work and the critique is not meant to be taken too harshly. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klute Posted November 16, 2005 Report Share Posted November 16, 2005 Nice, clean and smooth. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mosch Posted November 16, 2005 Report Share Posted November 16, 2005 Nice paintjob alright, but I hate the model. It looks as if someone jammed a yardstick up her... um... bottom? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathan Caroland Posted November 16, 2005 Report Share Posted November 16, 2005 Welcome to the Wyrd. I like the colors that you have chosen and I actually like the water (I go for an over the top comic look myself, that's what I call this style) but I think the hair has been too severely highlighted as Anders pointed out above. Some good work there and the only shortfalls are the miniature itself really. I envision her more as she's keeping her balance, arms out slightly, one before her perhaps, slightly bent at the waist and the knees and her clothing giving her a sense of motion behind her. She seems very stiff - although, I imagine you could put it up to her being a 'haughty sorceress'. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EricJ Posted November 16, 2005 Report Share Posted November 16, 2005 I pretty much 2nd everything Anders said. Also I do like the eyeshadow matching the dress, however it also looks as though the eyes could use a bit more definition to make the effect work better. The skin is really nicely done Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tidoco2222 Posted November 16, 2005 Report Share Posted November 16, 2005 Very nice I like the way you have done the water on the base and the skin is very well done too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheMasses Posted November 17, 2005 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2005 Hey all, I want to thank you for taking the time to reply.:thumb: Ritual - Good critique, good insight and I didn't think it was harsh at all. As for the pose I guess she must be a little to prim and proper for her own good. Thanks again, Andy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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